Editing, Proofreading, and Manuscript Critique
Whether you have a completed manuscript, a first draft, or just a few chapters, I can provide
quality editing and feedback to ensure that your novel, memoir, or nonfiction text is written to
the highest quality, in a format suitable for self-publishing or submission to a publisher or literary agent.
I offer literary editing/evaluation for unpublished novels, short stories, and creative non- fiction. I have a
good eye for what works, what doesn’t, and how to fix it. As a writer, I’ve gone the traditional route (NeWest
Press, Whitecap Books, Robert Davies Publishing), and self-publishing (Amazon’s CreateSpace, Mediscript
Communications). I know the value of an independent, objective perspective and can provide helpful
feedback on plot, structure, characterization, dialogue and narrative strength.
If you’re a new writer, I can help you find your voice. Whatever your situation, I can help you tell your story
more powerfully.
My fees are based on the length of the manuscript, starting at $50 for a critique of up to 4 pages, a short
story, or a short first chapter. Please keep in mind this does not include proof-reading for punctuation,
spelling, capitalization, consistency of tense and so on. If agreed, I can include proofing for an extra $50.
The following rates are based on proof-reading and copy-editing, and a structural assessment of the manuscript. I provide three Word files: a copy showing my edits in tracked chnges, a clean copy with the changes accepted, and an overall assessment of the work, showing strengths, weaknesses and suggestions for improvement.
3000 to 5,000 words (10-20 pages, double-spaced): $250
5,000 – 10,000 (20-40 pages, double-spaced): $350
10,000-40,000 (40-160 pages, double spaced): $500
40,000-60,000 words (160-230 pages, double-spaced): $850
For manuscripts longer than 230 pages, please contact me at margietlr4@gmail.com to receive a quote or text me at 604-803-8538.
I had a really positive experience receiving feedback from Margie on my children’s book. The review was thoughtful, detailed, and clearly came from a place of genuine care.
I especially appreciated how specific the suggestions were – from word choices and writing style to bigger-picture elements like structure, pacing, and audience fit. The feedback helped me see my story from a new perspective and gave me practical, actionable ideas for improving it.
While highlighting the positives, Margie also didn’t shy away from providing constructive critique so I could truly improve my work.
I’d definitely recommend Margie to other writers looking to strengthen their work! – Marta Maleki
5 stars:
I hired Margie for my debut book as my first editor. She had a big job on her hands. Her work was thorough, and she always delivered within the promised timeframe. I learned a great deal from her, especially about publishing standards I hadn’t known before. Margie is a true professional—patient, personable, and a pleasure to work with. Thank you, Margie, for helping a newbie like me. – Ming Louis Stein
Sometimes the universe answers back.
I had been looking for an editor to assist with my manuscript so I put out the call
and Margie responded. She wonderfully tightened up all that needed to be done and some.
I could not be more pleased. Her brilliant overview of my manuscript with suggestions on how to improve the flow of the story without bashing as some may do has given me hope that I am on the right track. I would without doubt recommend Margie. I was reminded that a good editor is worth their weight in gold and Margie is indeed that gold. – Mark J. G. Fahey
I have known Margie for a few years. She has been instrumental in guiding me
on how to improve my writing. With her help, I was able to publish my short story
collection. She is a wonderful editor, always respecting the writer’s voice while
suggesting ways to improve the story’s flow. Her work is thorough, covering many aspects of the editing process. I have learned so much working with Margie, more than just going over writing books or seminars. If people ask me for one of the best editors in the Lower Mainland, I would recommend Margie without any doubt. – Margarita Escobar
“Years back CrimsonPepper was fortunate enough to be introduced to the talented Margie Taylor. Since then, we have hired Margie numerous times as she never ceases to amaze us. Her input on projects are always insightful and talents incomparable. Professionalism of the highest level. Delivery on time, every time.”
“Thank you very much for editing my paper. This was a huge help. All your comments are very helpful as well, as I want to keep learning as I go through this process!”
“Thank you for your speedy work. It is absolutely fine, I did expect editing such work will be difficult, I am happy you did it 🙂 Really appreciate your work as always.”